"I have to go", you say,
and a trickle of sand
falls from the ceiling,
a soft snake slithering
its way across the floor.
By the time you leave
your footsteps are muffled
and make no sound -
a silence of heartbeats
and dust winnowed light.
Your feet sink a little
as you walk toward the door.
Afterwards, I lock the windows,
gather fistfuls of touch
to let slip through my hands.
Sheets of sand silt over
the shape of our love-making
and the dust rises
seeking breath like a mirage.
Soon the room shall be filled,
buried, the desert
of your going contained
within four walls;
only my eyes shall remain,
awake but unseeing,
like shells left over
from a long-ago sea.
7 comments:
"a silence of heartbeats..
..gather fistfuls of touch"
Liked it. Don't know why, but I liked it. Nice!
~N.
Oh, I meant that for the whole poem, not just for those two lines.
~N.
me loved it.
"and the dust rises
seeking breath like a mirage."
"only my eyes shall remain,
awake but unseeing,
like shells left over
from a long-ago sea."
tragically beautiful.
Whilst random reading, found your poem.
first rate and well written. the single emotion is well described, the moment caught somehow.
A fine poem.
I predict a long eulogy coming up.
wistful and tragic...beautifully written
~babitha
N: Thanks. Liking something without knowing why is the best kind of appreciation there is.
kronoskraor: Thanks.
kubla khan: Thanks. Maybe I should try this random reading thing myself sometime.
soundbyte_king: You were right, of course. See above.
babitha: Thanks
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